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Abi's avatar

There is a way to get your point across without the inflated pseudo intellectual writing. It comes off as very desperate and unnecessary. The point you’re making is incredibly simple and you’re writing it as if it’s an academic paper. Considering your followers know you have never talked like this in your posts/videos.

You should read William Zinnsser’s “On Writing Well”. It’s a basic that you could learn a lot from.

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Kate White's avatar

This was the appropriate caption choice.

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